Here's the first draft of my descriptive essay from the begining of the year, with the peer review at the bottom.

Well so far my group members and I have picked a theme which is revenge. We have also, started to  find lines that circle around our theme. However it is quite dififcult because the theme that we have there isn't that much stuff to work with. Seeing as how most of the book isn't about revenge because most of the people don't do anything for another person to pratice revenge on them. So its calmly frustrating but it's ok i guess for now. Last, we have decided that we r going to make a podcast as our choice of presentation and that is fine with me because i hate acting lol.

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2/12/08

    From the explanation of this project as a whole, it seems unbearable. Completely impossible. My expectations were that there was no way I could do it. When I first looked it over, I didn’t even know how or where to begin. At this point in time though, I’m pleased with the progress I’m making on this project.
    Don’t get me wrong, this project is HARD. It’s REALLY hard, but I feel like I am getting somewhere. The pluses are that I feel like I am learning about my topic, I am finding some really good examples and I’m learning about a lot of different sub-issues that are covered under my topic. The things I’m struggling with so far are definitely narrowing down my topic. I think as of now, my topic is pretty large. It covers a lot. I think to move on, I really need to refine and decide exactly what I want to focus on.
    I’m generally happy with how this is going so far. I think there are things I need to work on and things I need to fix, but I don’t think I’m nearly as lost as I was when I first found out about this challenge. I think the progress is going up at a steady pace. I think the obstacles are there, but not impossible. Mostly, I think that as a 10th grade English class, we are doing something different and amazing. That’s the most satisfying progress so far.