Dominican Republic, Wright-Mel

Comments (9)

Kennedy Coverdale (Student 2015)
Kennedy Coverdale

I like how you put he pictures of yourselves in the first slide. I liked the pictures. The text is readable.

You should put text on the slide to tell whats going on. ( i did the same thing ): ) Make sure to slow down the speed.

Imani Rothwell (Student 2014)
Imani Rothwell

I like your picture I like the design I like how you have a citation page that was creative

Slow down the Video Have a little more description on what you did and what the place looks like

Dre'quan Taylor (Student 2013)
Dre'quan Taylor

5 positive comments

Nice Presentation Good Design You have a citation page. That's Nice I like how you have pictures of everywhere you went. Like how you described the first place.

Slow the Video down Describe what you did in each place.

Byshera Moore-Williams (Student 2014)
Byshera Moore-Williams
  1. I liked your pictures.
  2. that you put your pictures in the beginning.
  3. that you included everywhere you would have went to.
  4. there are titles to some of the pictures.
  5. its vary inviting.

  6. Slow the video down

  7. And you did not need citations.