Hey Alan, it's me Sean! Remember me? Of course you do :)
I thought your story title was interesting that's why I looked at it in the first place. I think it's important for writers to keep titles short sometimes to get the reader interested in it. It should be short and unique. As I read your story I noticed that you hand a sense of confusion in your stories character. I thought it was well executed.
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