I really enjoyed reading this story. The first thing i noticed was the first person narration, i believe it helped me feel the characters feelings. Also i really enjoy the dialogue it makes me really imagine what the characters are saying and how they are saying it.
Telling the story in first person made it a lot easier to understand the emotions. I also liked how at the end of the story it explains that the reason it was in the first person is because he was telling all this to his therapist. I also liked how short the sentences were it made it a lot easier to read.
I liked the overall vibe in this story, it honestly felt very nostalgic, like inspired by the 70s or 80s. I also really loved the drama and the relationship between Dainty Daniel and Roberto Alex Xander Tigerblood the 57th. I was able to experience the characters' feelings during the early half of the novel thanks to the first-person narration. The dialogue was used a lot to add more depth to the characters' interactions, and for the reader to really understand what the character is trying to portray.
This definitely used the first person point of view very well. It not only lets us know how much of a struggle the characters dealt with but also shows the readers the intrusive thoughts they go through by second guessing their not so ordinary lives.
This definitely used the first person point of view very well. It not only lets us know how much of a struggle the characters dealt with but also shows the readers the intrusive thoughts they go through by second guessing their not so ordinary lives.
this story is very nice to read. I really like technique of using dialogue in this story, I like how I can imagine the conversation. the ending was very good too because I think they kind of ended with the readers wondering what will happen next. it's also nice seeing other languages in the writing, very creative.
For the first part of the story, I noticed the first-person narration, it really allowed me to feel the character's emotions, but more specifically the dialogue allowed me to find out what sort of tones characters express. It allows me to know the behaviors of characters with others. I like the lines nearing the end, the conflicting ideas, what is this place, where am I, yet this city is so beautiful.
For the first part of the story, I noticed the first-person narration, it really allowed me to feel the character's emotions, but more specifically the dialogue allowed me to find out what sort of tones characters express. It allows me to know the behaviors of characters with others. I like the lines nearing the end, the conflicting ideas, what is this place, where am I, yet this city is so beautiful.
this was actually really good. it lived up to the campy 80s action movie vibe the cover gave me. surprisingly a solid emotional ending and a super fun story overall. Robert Alex Xander Tigerblood was a super fun character to follow who made me want to know more about his life. I think some of the time skips broke my immersion with how big they were, and the shift in narration after the training montage into his teen years was also a bit off putting. really fun read though would recommend
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