Media Fluency (revised) -Sam Gualtieri

Posted by Thomas Gualtieri in Technology - Freshman · Hull · d1 Band on Thursday, December 22, 2016 at 6:54 pm

Based off of the critique I received on my initial slide, I made a lot of changes.

For my first change, I cut down on the textual notes a lot. I shortened the bullet points and got rid of the main point box. I then enlarged the text box so it was easy to read and filled up more of the space. Then I cropped the tri-pod off of the camera and enlarged that as well. I took the filmstrip texture and put it on both sides of the images, then put a black divider between the pictures. I switched the bottom two images because one of them didn’t match the color of the other two so it looked best to put it in the middle. I took the title of the presentation, made it a bit smaller and moved it to the right a little bit so it wasn’t so close to the edge. Through this I’ve learned that consistency is important and that size is an important factor in visual artwork.

Comments (14)

Mackenzie Hopkins

Your slide improved a lot, the text isn't too cluttered and the pictures have a more organized look to them now.

Alina Seing

I can see the changes that you made in this part. You did a very nice job of using less words and more bullet points. Your slide is very interesting and very eye catching.

Chandrea Lack

Based off of the first slide and the new slide you took everyone critiques and thoughtfully put together your slide and what you like to do. Great job.

Cianni Mack

Your slide works well because your text is easy to read and gets your point across good job !

Amira Gouri

You improved a lot from your old slide. The pictures fit perfectly now, and the texts are much easier to read. The colors fit perfectly with it, which makes it very eye catching.

Rasa Watson

Your text is easy to read and you get the point of your slide across well.

Thomas Gualtieri

Sam you are such a talented and cool guy thank you for blessing us with this ingenious design that I'm sure will be a commercial hit. The color scheme and formatting are superb and sure to be imitated by advertisers all over america. You truly are a visual and thematic mastermind. Keep up the groundbreaking work!

William Flenner

It is very eye catching although if it were to be seen on a highway billboard the driver would not have enough time to read all of the information it time. However your editing and excluding of parts makes the image a little more clean.

William Flenner

Benjamin Rivera

Sam your tiny changes brought out your slide largely. The only thing is I don't think you need the description in the blue bubble.

Nasya Ie

The changes you made are clear and that you have made text on your slide. Overall very good!

Sarah Son

Your slide is very eye catching and I do see improvements! Good job Sam!

Timothy Williams

the changes were clear to see from your original slide. the point of what the slide and what you wanted to say as also very clear.

Teyonna Little

I can clearly see the changes you made from your first slide to your second. You did a good job with changing your images around. I do suggest though that you take out the text bubble and enlarge your camera with a stand. Your slide is really interesting and nice.